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July 10 by amaranthine-eternity July 10 by amaranthine-eternity

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This is for Flash Fiction Month. I was thinking about the idea of heartstrings and this is what I came up with. Please tell me what you think. Yes, there is gore in this, but no sex. Haha, I missnamed this originally. Sorry.
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KageNoKarasu Featured By Owner Nov 20, 2012
first line: urge to laugh
doffing his hat…. there's two his' there
and the spelling errors are still in the last paragraph as others have pointed out.

All around a decent read. Was written quickly and could use a read through. But again, you show that you're good at writing the short stories, the fables.
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amaranthine-eternity Featured By Owner Dec 1, 2012  Professional General Artist
I need to edit (Hell, I need an actual editor), but yeah thanks very much.
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gothchick913 Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
this is really awesome. there is a typo though heart should be hand
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amaranthine-eternity Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2012  Professional General Artist
I know, I really should change it. Thank you!
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gothchick913 Featured By Owner Oct 11, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
ok i just wanted to tell you just in case
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amaranthine-eternity Featured By Owner Oct 12, 2012  Professional General Artist
It's cool. Thanks for pointing it out- I hate when people see an error and don't mention it.
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gothchick913 Featured By Owner Oct 12, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
:)
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amaranthine-eternity Featured By Owner Oct 13, 2012  Professional General Artist
Urgh, I need to get off my ass and write more...
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gothchick913 Featured By Owner Oct 13, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
i get like that from time to time but inspiration strikes at odd times
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amaranthine-eternity Featured By Owner Oct 14, 2012  Professional General Artist
Yeah, like most of my poetry was written when I was so tired I could barely see.
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